Tuesday, April 26, 2016

Infographics

Final Exam Preview

1.) Summarize what you watched and read about - let's say 2-3 paragraphs of 3-4 sentences
I learned a lot about the basics of iMovie and what the program can do. A person can use iMovie by dragging and dropping images and videos. With iMovie you can speed up and slow down footage making the website professional.
2.) Tell me one thing that you already knew about iMovie that the website explained
I already knew that iMovie had themes that have titles and transitions. The website did explain this early on in the article. 
3.) Tell me one thing that you learned new today that you didn’t know before.
I learned that you can record narration directly on the application, which I didn't know before. This piece of information will help me later on because I have to narrate my movie.
4.) What are you concerned about with this final project?
I'm concerned my movie might look basic and poorly done. Also I am worried about incorporating pictures with the video.
5.) What are you confident you can complete early and have ready to use?
Nothing really, but I am confident that I now know how to use iMovie. Hopefully I can figure out the rest of my project soon.
6.) If I asked you today, what do you think you will do for your video?
I am still not sure, but I am thinking of doing a documentary style for my movie.

Monday, April 25, 2016

SNO Online Papers

1. Who wrote the story?
Aiososa Omere.
2. What is their story about?
This story is about the holiday Valentine's day and what the day is all about and the controversy surrounding it, the importance of this day of love and/or the lack of it. The author tells her opinion of the holiday in this article. 
3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing.
The author feels that this holiday is annoying and , "shouldn't be celebrated at all." She thinks the day is unnecessary and, "Love is too rich of a feeling to be cheapened by lacy dollies and cheesy cards." Overall, the author suggests that Valentines day should not make single people feel bad about themselves and couples should not need cooperate America tell them when to profess their love for each other.
4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?
The author briefly mentions the other side of this topic, the positive side of the holiday. That Valentine's day is a nice holiday that brings couples together.
5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.
This article was not wishy-washy. The author had a strong opinion about the topic, which she clearly showed.
The author only states her opinion.
6. Are there any quotes in the story?
There are no quotes in this story.
7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?
The article was written with a 3rd person point of view. Though it felt like a first person article because of the author's obvious opinions in the text.

1. Who wrote the story?
Jake Manderson and Charlie Turner.
2. What is their story about?
Their story is about whether it is appropriate to call others retarded. 
3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing.
The pair agrees that using the word retarded is inappropriate and hurtful, "this word alienates people with learning disabilities as inferior as those without."
The author feels like schools should provide test-optional applications to accommodate for all types of students. 
4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?
They do mention the other side of the debate, that it's just a word and people should not take it seriously. They do counter this though.
5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.
This article as far as I could see, is not wishy-washy. They clearly stated why their arguments are superior.
6. Are there any quotes in the story?
Yes, there are lots of quotes from students and the peace club.
7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?
This story was written in 3rd person.

1. Who wrote the story?
Kevin Booza
2. What is their story about?
This story is about whether gun rights are more important than gun control and vice versa. 
3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing.
The author believes that gun control is more important than gun rights, "the bad in criminals will always outweigh the good in responsible gun owners." He feels that gun control outweighs the need for gun rights.
4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?
The author did address the other side of this topic, that people feel like it's there right to own firearms to feel safe.
5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.
I don't think this article was wishy-washy. The author stated both sides of the argument but made it clear which side was superior.
6. Are there any quotes in the story?
No quotes in this story.
7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?
Third person.

Friday, April 22, 2016

Personal Essay

1. What was one idea that the writer gave in the Wide Range of Topics section that you can use as you start deciding on a topic?
The author suggests to write about something that you are passionate about and have an opinion on. Also maybe something from your personal experiences.

2. What was one idea the writer gave in the Opinions Pieces section that you should remember as you are writing your piece?

The author says writers should remember to not generalize when you write. To be as specific as possible. Also for writers to put their work in context that gives readers insight to both the small moments and the wider prospective. The author also mentions that to have a compelling essay one must show rather than tell.

3. List three suggestions the writer makes in the Personal Essays and Crafts section that you will use as you write.
The author suggests to avoid philosophical rants, make connections, and to write persuasively. A writer should use the author's advice to be a better writer.


 

My Opinions Story


  Recently, a bill to regulate Uber, Lyft, and similar transportation services was proposed. These services have lately been very popular. According to KUT.org in Austin Texas there have been more than 2.5 million rides from these services since June of 2014. The number of rides in the area has likely only gone up. As these transportation services grow bigger, they should require background checks and do everything they can to keep their passengers safe.
  For most Jobs, background checks are required. One of the reasons why services like Uber/Lyft are so popular and successful is because the companies don't have to go through local regulations. Why should Uber and Lyft services be an exception? Other ground transportation drivers like bus, taxi, and limo drivers, competitors of Uber are fingerprinted. It would only be fair for Uber and Lyft to go through with these necessary safety regulations to generate fair competition and help protect the people.
  Another important reason why I think a bill to regulate transportation services like Uber is necessary is that regulations would help prevent crimes related to ride-hailing drivers. From Pewtrusts.org on November 24, 2015, Attorneys found that just that summer twenty five uber drivers in the two cities of San Francisco and Los Angeles, had criminal records. Regulations would help prevent criminals from being drivers. And decrease the new's reports that keep surfacing of crimes committed by ride-hailing drivers.
  Someone against the idea of a regulation of Uber/Lyft could point out that regulations would not be necessary or fair, because the drivers of these services are not actual employees. It is true Uber drivers are not technically real employees, but Uber is still a growing business that should value their customer's safety.
  Since the start of these transportation services, there has been a series of sexual assault and harassment cases involving Uber and Lyft. Sexual assault and harassment has been an issue in all of the ride-sharing industry, but there is a higher degree of accountability with Taxi drivers, because of their background checks. This bill could help change Uber's process for hiring drivers. Which is currently dangerously negligent.
  A reason why many people are opposed too background checks on Uber/Lyft, is because they think it will cause people to lose their jobs and to not want to work for Uber/Lyft. Some say regulations would defeat the purpose of Uber: a fast ride. But regulations would not destroy Uber's concept, it would just make the business safer for all. Criminals would be discouraged to work for Uber/Lyft because of this initiative. 
 Currently, drivers of services of Uber/Lyft use their own cars that may not have commercial licenses. They also may not have insurance policies that would fully cover anyone that could be injured in accidents. Regulations should be required to ensure the passenger's safety.

  Uber, Lyft, and similar transportation services must improve their safety by having background checks. Safety is important and necessary because millions of people use Uber and Lyft. I think regulations would improve the lives of all involved and better the world.

Wednesday, April 20, 2016

Opinions Writing Preview Activity


Apple Refuses To Violate Privacy Of Users
1. Who wrote the story?
2. What is their story about?
The story is about Apple refusing the violation of privacy of users by the FBI.
3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing.
The paper's opinion is, "we call for action and legislation to make sure they only with the approval from the courts and not just if they suspect something."
4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?
Yes the paper mentions the other side's opinion.
5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.
6. Are there any quotes in the story?
No quotes in this story.
7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?
1st person.

Drug Dog Investigations Have Students Feeling as Though Their Rights Are Being Violated At School
1. Who wrote the story?
2. What is their story about?
Drog dog investigations at school and how students feel about them.
3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing.
I feel " school safety is crucial," and therefore drug investigations at school are necessary. 
4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?
They mention that students feel as though their rights are being violated.
5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.
I did not thing they were wishy-washy with their opinions.
6. Are there any quotes in the story?
Yes there are quotes.
7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?
1st person.

Social Media, Back At It Again
1. Who wrote the story?
2. What is their story about?
Social media and current trends.
3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing.
My opinion of what this article is covering, "I thought that the video was funny but after a while it was starting to get annoying."
4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?
Yes they mention the trend may be annoying and overplayed, but it s good that people use their fame for good like Daniel and Josh.
5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.
This was not wishy- washy they showed both sides of the story.
6. Are there any quotes in the story?
Yes there are quotes.
7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?
1st person.
Beyonce Causes Controversy
1. Who wrote the story?
2. What is their story about?
Beyonce's controversy and her dreams of equality.
3. What is their direct opinion about that topic? Please quote it directly from the story or do a really good job of paraphrasing.
Yes, the opinion was "justice is indivisible. You can't decide who gets civil rights and who doesn't." 
4. Did they address what the other side might think about their topic?
They don't really address the other side of this story.
5. Were they wishy-washy with their opinion? By this I mean did they every go back and say well maybe if this were to happen, then their opinion wouldn't be valid. Support your opinion.
I feel like this story was a little wishy- washy because it is long and they went back and suggested the opinion.
6. Are there any quotes in the story?
yes, there was quotes.
7. What point of view did they write in (1st, 2nd or 3rd)?
1st person.
Finally, answer the following questions:

A. What do you think the major differences between a hard news story and an opinions piece? Come up with at least three.
A hard story tells the straight facts, No opinion. They are in third person and report basic knowledge. An opinions piece is in first person and tells the author's opinion and viewpoint of the story. 
A difference are the tone of the story.
B. Why do you think there aren't very many photos on this page?
Because the story is the main part and a lot of photographs are not necessary for this article.
C. What are three topics you think would be good to write
Current events, New technology, social media trends, etc.
pinions piece on?

Tuesday, April 12, 2016

Earthquake story

An earthquake rocked the San Francisco Bay area Monday morning. The quake struck at 8:12 a.m. PDT.  A building housing McHenry's Auto Supply at at 2342 Plum st. partially collapsed, killing two people and injuring six others.
"Names of the dead are being withheld pending notifications of families," Jennifer Vu, a public information officer from the Hayward Fire Department, comments.

The epicenter of the earthquake, which had a magnitude of 6.4 on the Richter scale, was under the Hayward Hills. The earthquake occurred on the Hayward Fault, which runs under the hills.
"The quake was a strong one," scientist from the U.S. Geological Survey in Menlo park, Penny Gertz said, " People as far south as Los Angeles and as far north as Redding felt the quake."

Three of the six people injured were hurt seriously enough to require hospitalization and were transported to Hayward General hospital.
"No other serious injuries have been reported," Vu mentions.

Hayward resident Mike Beamer, whose apartment is across the street from McHenry's said he felt a rolling motion that lasted for about 30 seconds, with a big jolt coming in the middle.
" I was eating my breakfast when the room started rolling. I dove under the table just as I heard the explosion outside and a chunk of cement flew through my kitchen window. Thats when the screaming started across the street," Beamer recalls.

Hayward fire fighters used ropes to stabilize the auto supply shop, conducting a search of the building and capped a gas line after detecting a gas leak at the site.
"Twenty-one fire personnel, 12 police and five American Red Cross workers responded to the building collapse with some arriving within four minutes of the quake," Vu reports.

Huntington story

Living in Barstow California, 53 year old Janice Jone's dog knocked her gun off a carseat. The weapon discharged when it hit the floor. This all happened around 10 p.m on a Wednesday according to California Highway Patrol press liaison Tammy Rye.

Jones was eating pork chops in the back of her motor home, which was parked on Beach Boulevard near Highway 1, when the events happened. When the weapon discharged and hit the floor, the bullet passed through Jone's leg and through the side of the vehicle. 
" It could have been worse," Rye comments. "The bullet hit two inches from the gas tank." 

Jones was cited for expired plates and the county's district attorney's office was considering whether to charge her in relation to the gun accident.
" Jones doesn't have a permit for the gun," Rye mentions.

Jones was transported to Huntington Beach Hospital via ambulance and later was transported to Irvine Medical Center
"Jones was shot in the right leg around ten at night," reported Rye. This was also confirmed by Jim Washington, a spokesman for Huntington Beach Hospital.

Jone's dog, a Pomeranian named Tombo, was placed in the care of the Huntington Beach Animal Control officers. 
"The dog seemed to be malnourished," recorded Janet Ngo, one of the animal control officers. 

The dog also had fresh cigarette burns on its forehead. Ngo indicated that her office would explore filing animal abuse charges against Jones. 
" It could have done with a little less abuse and a few more of those pork chops," Ngo said.



Friday, April 8, 2016

News Values

    Conflict
    Article: 13 Koreans Working Abroad Defect to the SouthThe title of this article suggest a conflict between the two forces: North and South Korea. The conflict between the two countries has intensified over the past couple years. South Korea has recently asked citizens to no longer visit North Korean- restaurants in the area.http://www.nytimes.com/2016/04/09/world/asia/north-korean-defectors-restaurant-south-korea.html?ref=world&_r=0

    Proximity
    Article: Homeless Teen Named Sole Suspect in UT-Austin Student Death

    This article would fit the news value proximity because the story is about the most recent homicide at the university of Texas since 1966. The article reports new facts and information surrounding the case in Austin Texas which is where I am.
    http://college.usatoday.com/2016/04/08/homeless-teen-named-sole-suspect-in-ut-austin-student-death/

    Timeliness
    Article: FlyDubai Crash Most Likely Caused By Pilot Error, Investigators Say
    This article would be considered to have a news value of timeliness because the story is about new facts surrounding the FlyDubai plane crash. The plane crash was due to bad weather and untrained pilots.
    http://www.nytimes.com/2016/04/09/world/europe/flydubai-crash-russia.html?ref=world

    Prominence 
    Article: Jacob Tremblay Brought a Puppy on a Red Carpet
    I would consider this article about young actor Jacob Tremblay bringing a puppy to the red carpet the news value prominence, because the red carpet is a newsworthy event and the young actor is a newsworthy person. This article is probabily one out of many red-carpet stories that will stand out to viewers.
    http://www.usatoday.com/story/life/entertainthis/2016/04/08/jacob-tremblay-puppy-red-carpet/82788310/

    Impact
    Article: Fates Diverging, Afghan and Syrian Migrants Clash in Greece
    I would classify this article as the news value impact because this story is about the effect overcrowded camps and war have on Afghans and Syrians. Afghans and Syrians are both fighting for a place of refuge, because as refugees they were forced by the event of war to migrate else where. This is what the article is about and why it is impactful.
    http://www.nytimes.com/2016/04/09/world/europe/fates-diverging-afghan-and-syrian-migrants-clash-in-greece.html?ref=world

    Novelty
    Article: 'Calling Sweden. You will Soon Be Connected to a Random Swede, Somewhere in Sweden'
    I would categorize this quirky article the news value novelty because of how upbeat and original it is. People will be attracted to the unusualness of this story about callers being paired up with a random Swede over the phone.
    http://www.nytimes.com/2016/04/09/world/europe/sweden-call-random-swede-number.html?ref=world

    Human Interest
    Article: Boko Haram Turns Female Captives Into Terrorists
    This article would be considered the news value human interest because it surrounds captives facing the emotional struggle of being suicide bombers. The women are kidnapped from their homes and taught how to carry bombs.
    http://www.nytimes.com/2016/04/08/world/africa/boko-haram-suicide-bombers.html?ref=world



    Wednesday, April 6, 2016

    Student Of The Month Story


    Who - Jonah Warner
    What - Student of the month
    Where - bowie high school
    When - March 31, 2016
    Why - Because he received student of the month
    How -  smart, good grades, great study habits




     On March 31,2016, Jonah Warner was interviewed for being student of the month at bowie high school. Twenty questions were asked to help better understand the student of the month. Jonah eagerly talked about himself and information about the award. Jonah won this honor because of his excellent grades and study habits.

       One of the reasons why junior Jonah Warner was awarded student of the month is because of his stellar grades. 
    "Jonah is a fantastic student who continues to ace all of his tests," U.S history teacher Mr. Ryan raves.
      Many students at Bowie find studying particularly difficult. Warner keeps up with his grades by constantly studying.                       
    "To study hard you must stare at the material for a long time,"  Warner states, explaining his study habits. 
     What motivates Warner to be successful is his knowledge that he will be successful. He feels he deserves this award for all of his hard work and studying.
    "Not many guys get nominated for this award," admits school administrator Mack.
     Another reason why Warner feels like he won this award is because of his friend group, which has always been supporting Warner. 
     "Jonah is the best at what he does, Studying, and I want to be there for him. I see Jonah as an energetic dude that is determined to be a young Bill Gates," Joe, a close friend of Warner's comments.
    When choosing someone for student of the month at Bowie high school, teachers and administrators join together to pick a well-rounded student that has excelled academically and socially. 
     "I knew I was going to win this award because I am the smartest," Warner says after winning this award.
     Previous winners of this honor have gone and done great things. Teachers expect Warner to be excepted into a prestigious college and change the world for the better. 
    "I plan to be the smartest person in the world and graduate from Bowie and eventually Texas University," Warner mentions.
     This year, according to Warner's parents he has been constantly studying. But Warner has more hobbies then just studying.
    "I like BMX, motocross, going outdoors, and going to Housepark downtown," Warner explains excitedly.
     In all of Warner's classes his teachers have been impressed by his work.
    "He seems to have no weaknesses. Just strengths. One of his strengths seems to be studying," Warner's pleased biology teacher comments. 
     Warner was recently spotted biking at Housepark. According to Warner's friends and family members it is not rare for him to be biking.
    "Jonah has always wanted to be a professional biker. His determination has helped him achieve this award and will hopefully help him become a professional biker,"  Linda, the mother of Warner confides. 
      Warner enjoys all of his classes because he thrives in them all. 
    "Lunch would have to be my favorite class. Or my off period because I can study them," Warner says.
      Completing homework is very important for a student to be able to succeed like Warner.
    "Jonah has always said to himself 'do your homework'," a fan of Warner shares.
    After achieving his new title as student of the month, Warner feels relived and grateful.
    " Winning this feels great, takes a big weight off my shoulders," Warner sighs. 

    Monday, April 4, 2016

    Nut Graf

    A nut graf is slang that means some sentences that summarize the essence of a story. Editors at magazines and newspapers use this slang. It is a very important part of any story or the most important part of a story because it tells the readers why they are reading the story. A nut graf provides transition in a story because a nut graf transitions from the lead and connects the lead to the rest of the story.
    A nut graf is a single paragraph that explains why the story is relevant. When writing a nut graf, one would write in a narrative tone. A nut graf is very important because it gives more detail and explains the lead.

    Inverted Pyramid